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導讀:

  投訴信也叫抱怨信。一般是當自己的正常生活受到騷擾、自己的利益受到侵害或當社會規范有失規范時,用來表達不滿情緒和提出批評。所有的投訴信都有一個共同點,就是最終是要收信人解決問題,所以需要提出解決方案。考生應該注意如果題目中沒有給出解決方案,那么就要根據投訴內容中的不滿提出自己的解決方案。具體寫作步驟:

  首段:表明來信所要投訴的問題,盡可能做到客觀禮貌,給讀者留下好印象,應該記住讀信人不一定就是錯誤的責任人,他的合作對事情的最后解決有著非常重要的作用。

  主體段落:寫明投訴的原因、問題的經過及產生的后果。可以說具體的理由,也可以說問題的具體體現方式。

  結尾段:提出解決方案,不需展開。這段應體現書信的禮貌原則,可以用類似“如果你能……,我將十分感激”這樣的表達方式。還要注意做到公平、公正。

  2.必背模版句型

  I am writing to make a #plaint about……

  我寫信是為了投訴……

  I am most reluctant to #plain,but……

  我非常不愿意投訴,但……

  One annoying aspect of your service is……

  你們的服務項目中一個令人不滿的地方是……

  I have been pleased with your services for years,but now I feel very disappointed.

  多年來我一直很滿意你們的服務,但現在我非常失望。

  I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault……

  我想讓您知道這個問題/錯誤……

  I am writing to inform you that I find…… unsatisfactory.

  我寫信是為了告訴你我發現……令人非常不滿意。

  I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about……

  我想表達我對……的不滿/失望。

  It would be highly appreciated if you could……

  如果你能……我將萬分感謝。

  I trust you will take my #plaints seriously and……

  我相信你會認真對待我的投訴,并且……

  I hope you will give due attention to this matter.

  希望對此事你能給予足夠的重視。

  I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.

  我希望能在月底解決這事。

  I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly……

  如果你能……我將會非常滿意。

  I would appreciate it very much if you could……

  如果你能……我將非常感謝。

  3.必背經典范文

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would like to have a single room, because I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

  I am dissatisfied with my present roommate because of his inconsiderate behavior. For one thing,his friends are constantly visiting him;for another,he regularly makes calls at night. In addition,he often uses my things without asking for my permission. Under such circumstances,I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies,and I am falling behind in my assignments.

  I believe you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own,where I will be free from these kinds of distractions. I would be very grateful if you could arrange a single room for me,preferably not in the same building.

  Sincerely yours,

  Tom Williams

  譯文

  親愛的女士或先生:

  我寫信來是告訴您下學期我想搬到一個新房間。我想要一個單獨房間,因為我覺得現在這樣合住非常不方便。

  我之所以對我現在的室友不滿是因為他毫不顧及他人的行為。一方面,他老是有朋友來訪;另一方面,他夜里經常打電話。另外,他經常不經過我允許就用我的東西。在這種情況下,我很難專心學習,現在我的成績已經下降了。

  我相信您肯定同意惟一的解決辦法就是我搬到單獨的房間,那樣就沒有什么干擾了。如果您能幫我安排一個單獨的房間,最好不要在目前這個樓里,我將萬分感謝。